04-22-2012, 05:57 PM
i really really liked this on the first read, and the 2nd, and the 3rd.
i have no nits though there must be some. i like it too much to squander nits on it.
i think the last stanza if bloody marvellous. i can feel the voice of the speaker, deep and rich. Burtonesque.
the repetition in this, the refrain; works extremely well. it's just one of those times when all i have is praise. (sorry )
thanks for the read.
i have no nits though there must be some. i like it too much to squander nits on it.
i think the last stanza if bloody marvellous. i can feel the voice of the speaker, deep and rich. Burtonesque.
the repetition in this, the refrain; works extremely well. it's just one of those times when all i have is praise. (sorry )
thanks for the read.