The Wild Hunt ..

[abu nuwas]

Well, it gives you something to compare and contrast, regardless of the outcome. I wouldn't recommend "clickety-click" or sing song either, but a little cadence helps draw the reader in, that's my thought anyway.

Dale

Dale, I must not be defensive, and I agree with much that you say. The odd thing is, that if read in an Orcadian accent (for which imagine Welsh if you can), it sounds quite pleasant to me, in parts at least. Thanks again. E