Pavement
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had a quick chance to listen a bit. poems inspired by songs is interesting, seeing that the forms do have a relation.
the reason for the rapid jumps and interest in a broad smattering of events and details rather than a focused element becomes clearer, but again, I don't feel like it does you many favors for the piece.
Written only for you to consider.
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Pavement - by Chaotic Body - 04-15-2012, 03:08 AM
RE: Pavement - by Philatone - 04-17-2012, 10:36 AM
RE: Pavement - by billy - 04-17-2012, 10:56 AM
RE: Pavement - by Philatone - 04-18-2012, 05:00 AM
RE: Pavement - by tectak - 04-24-2012, 04:36 PM
RE: Pavement - by billy - 04-25-2012, 06:01 AM
RE: Pavement - by addy - 04-26-2012, 06:54 PM



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