04-15-2012, 08:43 AM
The diner is someone sitting at a table addressing someone else?
I thought that would really make a great domestic.. depression.. poem
I might go use that idea actually!
I also thought this could be people eating honey at the table
I didn't like the jump to the beekeeping clothing, I wanted to hear more about the bees
(Not people)
Maybe if it's valuable to hear about the beekeeping experience.. otherwise, it's obvious for me
Well, wouldn't be if I didn't know that fact already, but it feels like a wasted line
I've seen people fly individual bees using string... don't see how that protects you from them all
You can't ..control.. individual bees with beekeeping?
Maybe you can really emphasize on the smell or taste or colour of honey.
I like it though.
I thought that would really make a great domestic.. depression.. poem
I might go use that idea actually!
I also thought this could be people eating honey at the table
I didn't like the jump to the beekeeping clothing, I wanted to hear more about the bees
(Not people)
Maybe if it's valuable to hear about the beekeeping experience.. otherwise, it's obvious for me
Well, wouldn't be if I didn't know that fact already, but it feels like a wasted line
I've seen people fly individual bees using string... don't see how that protects you from them all
You can't ..control.. individual bees with beekeeping?
Maybe you can really emphasize on the smell or taste or colour of honey.
I like it though.