Pavement
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v2.0

White with red line, strip, stumbles
Lipstick, glass, of a face turned away
Gritty, dirty surface of the pavement, gravel, you !
Collapses together, red handbag and shoulders and glasses and pavement

Amber cast,
Many door-slams and stiletto-trots and screams, serve distant ambience
Amber hued door and bonnet, car spotlit on a stage casting Pavement
Inside lies solace, detachment: door a gateway to
Nasal lens-tinting; a new world of actions done here.

White with black line, dress
A pretty face queuing on Pavement
Shoulders brush bony male shoulders, two cast together in a play
Docile, shuffles along, shoved, laughs hurled

(end)


v1.0 Original


White with red line, strip
Lipstick, glass, of a face turned away
Gritty, dirty, MEAN surface of the pavement, gravel, you !
Collapses together, red handbag and shoulders and glasses and pavement
Poor lamb.

Amber cast
Door slams and stiletto trots and screams, serves distant ambience
Amber hued door and bonnet, car spotlighted, a stage casting Pavement
Inside lies solace, detachment; door a gateway to
Nasal lens-tinting; a new world of actions done here.

White with black line, dress
A pretty face, queuing on Pavement
Shoulders met with bony male shoulders, cast together in a play
Docile, shuffles along, shoved, laughs thrown
Poor lamb.

(end)

I tried some interesting new things here
Not sure what I'm doing with it
Inspired by this song (hip hop) I love it to bits
(very explicit adult lyrics)
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=cwM8HTt852I

this poem is released into the public domain.
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Messages In This Thread
Pavement - by Chaotic Body - 04-15-2012, 03:08 AM
RE: Pavement - by Philatone - 04-17-2012, 10:36 AM
RE: Pavement - by billy - 04-17-2012, 10:56 AM
RE: Pavement - by Philatone - 04-18-2012, 05:00 AM
RE: Pavement - by tectak - 04-24-2012, 04:36 PM
RE: Pavement - by billy - 04-25-2012, 06:01 AM
RE: Pavement - by addy - 04-26-2012, 06:54 PM



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