04-14-2012, 10:13 AM
thanks for the feedback, billy. i played around with the 'buts' and think you're right that i should tighten it up!
abu nuwas, i know it's kind of dark subject matter but it's for a specific assignment and this is what came out when i sat down to write. but i know sometimes for me, poetry is more for me than the audience.
abu nuwas, i know it's kind of dark subject matter but it's for a specific assignment and this is what came out when i sat down to write. but i know sometimes for me, poetry is more for me than the audience.