04-08-2012, 12:02 PM
(04-07-2012, 12:19 PM)Philatone Wrote: Second pots of teajust the one nit. in the 2nd line.
sit heavier than first is the first needed?
in cups so porcelain, the handles
try to break,
untouched. We ran out of news
as water boiled, now
the taste won't leave.
A bitter leaf
has found my tongue
and shed a seed,
swelling without
a drop of sun to grow.
i also liked the porcelain image of delicate

nicely done
thanks for the read.
