Angel in the Park

[billy]

i seriously like personal poetry. though i do hate to comment on it with critique, so i won't

there seems to be a lot of feeling in the piece and there's a line i really loved.

These thoughts smoked his mind. one of the best lines i've read in a while.
what i do see in the peace, is someone who loves their parents very dearly, that it shows so clearly is a good.

thanks for the read.