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Reunion
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04-07-2012, 02:32 PM
I'm sold. Love "the handles try to break, untouched" -- I'm pretty sure I went to that reunion. I agree with Todd on a "with" or even "in" to start the second stanza, but I'm pretty much lost for suggestions on the rest of it. The bitter leaf/seed notion is pure genius.
It could be worse
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RE: Reunion - by Todd - 04-07-2012, 12:26 PM
RE: Reunion - by Leanne - 04-07-2012, 02:32 PM
RE: Reunion - by Philatone - 04-07-2012, 11:06 PM
RE: Reunion - by billy - 04-08-2012, 12:02 PM
RE: Reunion - by Bronte - 04-08-2012, 03:31 PM
RE: Reunion - by Philatone - 04-13-2012, 01:32 PM
RE: Reunion - by addy - 04-13-2012, 05:50 PM
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