04-07-2012, 07:30 AM
again, i may be suffering from too much subtlety. I may try incorporating more with another revision before abandoning and sticking with the first. my reservation with the first one is that people will get confused as to the meaning and lose track of who I'm trying to identify, with too many names appearing in too short a space
thanks for the patience and re-reads, billy
thanks for the patience and re-reads, billy
Written only for you to consider.

