winter
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are the letters written using winter branches?
or branches grow3n since spring.

the 1st instance would make it a really good haiku.
the 2nd a really good senryu. as it is the reader has a choice.
this is my fave haiku so far.

thanks for the read.
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winter - by rayheinrich - 02-26-2012, 06:49 AM
RE: winter - by billy - 04-06-2012, 06:12 PM
RE: winter - by Philatone - 04-06-2012, 08:01 PM
RE: winter - by rayheinrich - 04-07-2012, 04:50 AM



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