after all your hard work, 
i have to say, i think i see the poem in the 1st version.
this edit now feels too far away from what i see in the 1st v.
where another identity
curves in ink like a contract
left on a table in a locked
and buried room, forgotten.
His wrists, unscathed
above a steering wheel,
draw me to my arms
where bonds rattle,
surface and sink.
i'm not sure how to take this part but the beginning ...i can't believe i didn't see big frank straight away,
is buck his assumed name on a bent license?
i do think some of the enjambment needed work but not as much.
i feel such an idiot.
i really am an idoit, it's all in the title isn't it, buck's the nic.
franks isn't as suitable as it was, because this kid is now huge, he has to be a buck?
i really am an idoit, it's all in the title isn't it, buck's the nic.
franks isn't as suitable as it was, because this kid is now huge, he has to be a buck?
i have to say, i think i see the poem in the 1st version.this edit now feels too far away from what i see in the 1st v.
where another identity
curves in ink like a contract
left on a table in a locked
and buried room, forgotten.
His wrists, unscathed
above a steering wheel,
draw me to my arms
where bonds rattle,
surface and sink.
i'm not sure how to take this part but the beginning ...i can't believe i didn't see big frank straight away,
is buck his assumed name on a bent license?
i do think some of the enjambment needed work but not as much.
i feel such an idiot.
i really am an idoit, it's all in the title isn't it, buck's the nic.
franks isn't as suitable as it was, because this kid is now huge, he has to be a buck?
i really am an idoit, it's all in the title isn't it, buck's the nic.
franks isn't as suitable as it was, because this kid is now huge, he has to be a buck?