04-02-2012, 05:50 AM
(02-24-2012, 07:26 AM)abu nuwas Wrote: Aspire she did, she did; she did aspirei'm sure i've heard this before yet i know i haven't, it feels as though i know it inside me. (which is a weird feeling to have)
To be, to be, to be.
Inspire she did, she did; she did inspire
To love, to love, to love
Around the lanes, the lanes; the lanes around
She went, and went, and went
Along the shore, the shore; the shore along
She strode, she strode, she strode.
Beneath the cliffs, the cliffs; the cliffs beneath
Is Sea, is Sea, is Sea.
Of clouds she dreamed, she dreamed; she dreamed of clouds
And sky, and sky, and sky.
Her home she loves, she loves;she loves her home
And will, and will, and will.
( It occurred to me that this in its way relates to the thread about rhyming. Not new.)
there is a poem called 'the sea the sea and i thought it reminded me of that so i went to read it and it didn't
. i just love it abu. for me the repitition gives it feeling. makes her in some way live no nits here.thanks for the read
