Our Local Business
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(02-24-2012, 07:26 AM)abu nuwas Wrote:  Aspire she did, she did; she did aspire
To be, to be, to be.

Inspire she did, she did; she did inspire
To love, to love, to love

Around the lanes, the lanes; the lanes around
She went, and went, and went

Along the shore, the shore; the shore along
She strode, she strode, she strode.

Beneath the cliffs, the cliffs; the cliffs beneath
Is Sea, is Sea, is Sea.

Of clouds she dreamed, she dreamed; she dreamed of clouds
And sky, and sky, and sky.

Her home she loves, she loves;she loves her home
And will, and will, and will.



( It occurred to me that this in its way relates to the thread about rhyming. Not new.)
i'm sure i've heard this before yet i know i haven't, it feels as though i know it inside me. (which is a weird feeling to have)
there is a poem called 'the sea the sea and i thought it reminded me of that so i went to read it and it didn't Sad. i just love it abu. for me the repitition gives it feeling. makes her in some way live no nits here.
thanks for the read
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Our Local Business - by abu nuwas - 02-24-2012, 07:26 AM
RE: Our Local Business - by Wildcard - 02-25-2012, 12:38 AM
RE: Our Local Business - by abu nuwas - 02-25-2012, 03:26 AM
RE: Our Local Business - by Leanne - 02-25-2012, 08:07 AM
RE: Our Local Business - by abu nuwas - 02-25-2012, 09:48 AM
RE: Our Local Business - by Wildcard - 02-25-2012, 12:32 PM
RE: Our Local Business - by abu nuwas - 02-25-2012, 12:49 PM
RE: Our Local Business - by Wildcard - 02-25-2012, 01:18 PM
RE: Our Local Business - by abu nuwas - 02-25-2012, 10:43 PM
RE: Our Local Business - by Wildcard - 02-26-2012, 05:31 AM
RE: Our Local Business - by Roy Hobbs - 03-22-2012, 01:13 AM
RE: Our Local Business - by abu nuwas - 03-22-2012, 10:18 AM
RE: Our Local Business - by Bronte - 03-22-2012, 06:44 AM
RE: Our Local Business - by Philatone - 03-22-2012, 01:15 PM
RE: Our Local Business - by abu nuwas - 04-01-2012, 09:20 PM
RE: Our Local Business - by billy - 04-02-2012, 05:50 AM
RE: Our Local Business - by abu nuwas - 04-02-2012, 07:39 AM
RE: Our Local Business - by billy - 04-02-2012, 11:07 AM
RE: Our Local Business - by ellajam - 02-19-2014, 12:42 AM
RE: Our Local Business - by Obadiah Grey - 02-25-2014, 02:04 AM



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