04-01-2012, 09:20 PM
Thanks for looking.
I seem to have missed your comment here -- or was so mortified that anyone could think my poem should attract anything less tha ''Awesome!'', that I had to choke back the fury.
In any event, on the show/tell scale, it is true that there is no show in the first bit, and precious little in the remainder. I think I really wanted to try out the rhythm more than anything.
I seem to have missed your comment here -- or was so mortified that anyone could think my poem should attract anything less tha ''Awesome!'', that I had to choke back the fury.
In any event, on the show/tell scale, it is true that there is no show in the first bit, and precious little in the remainder. I think I really wanted to try out the rhythm more than anything.