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My Father's absence:
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03-30-2012, 11:06 AM
transition was meant to mean that I felt as though I was missing something when I went from the stanza before to the stanza after. you were describing one story, then this other one blindsided me; not sure if others feel that same, but that is how it struck me
Written only for you to consider.
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My Father's absence: - by billy - 03-26-2012, 05:42 PM
RE: My Father's absence: - by heslopian - 03-27-2012, 02:54 AM
RE: My Father's absence: - by billy - 03-27-2012, 05:36 AM
RE: My Father's absence: - by Philatone - 03-29-2012, 12:48 PM
RE: My Father's absence: - by billy - 03-30-2012, 10:49 AM
RE: My Father's absence: - by Philatone - 03-30-2012, 11:06 AM
RE: My Father's absence: - by billy - 03-30-2012, 11:11 AM
RE: My Father's absence: - by billy - 04-01-2012, 11:04 AM
RE: My Father's absence: - by Philatone - 04-01-2012, 02:45 PM
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