03-26-2012, 09:54 AM
i like the poem to the extent that "she" is attaining enlightenment using
said dryer. "Toes" work for enlightenment as well. The only depressing part,
which i'd suggest be changed, is that burnt-sweaty smell of gender prejudice.
(Forget to wash before drying?)
Enlightenment, even through that most cruel of objects: the refrigerator, cannot
be obtained in this manner. Of course, if that's your point, then you need
to add a bunch more irony to your weight.
P.S. The real "bitch" is recursive thought.
P.P.S. 2 points awarded for using "bicameral consciousness".
a brightly colored fungus that grows in bark inclusions