Heart of Darkness
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Quote:I'm not sure that you not connecting as a reader is because I am failing to give you something to connect with, or your experience only allows an intellectual comprehension of what I am describing.

no need to worry; I think something like that has to apply to at least some situations. it is entirely possible that I can approach this piece up to a certain level only. that being said, I fear that I would not be the only one who felt a little isolated in reading it, and just wanted to bring that to your attention. only raised it as something to consider.

i'm glad some of what i suggested may be of use; should an edit arrive, i'll be in line to tango with it
Written only for you to consider.
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Heart of Darkness - by Erthona - 03-24-2012, 05:08 PM
RE: Heart of Darkness - by Philatone - 03-25-2012, 01:36 AM
RE: Heart of Darkness - by Roy Hobbs - 03-25-2012, 02:11 PM
RE: Heart of Darkness - by Erthona - 03-25-2012, 02:23 PM
RE: Heart of Darkness - by Philatone - 03-25-2012, 03:52 PM
RE: Heart of Darkness - by Erthona - 03-25-2012, 04:10 PM
RE: Heart of Darkness - by Roy Hobbs - 03-26-2012, 12:53 AM
RE: Heart of Darkness - by Erthona - 03-26-2012, 10:14 AM
RE: Heart of Darkness - by Roy Hobbs - 03-26-2012, 10:30 AM
RE: Heart of Darkness - by Erthona - 03-26-2012, 05:33 PM



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