A Lesson In Prolepsis
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a little dark and a lot likeable

the ambiguity in it is perfect.
Veruska giggled and got in-- a creamy wafer
wedged between two big men; and I thought,

what a really strong image.

for me this would be called a keeper.
thanks for the read.

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A Lesson In Prolepsis - by Roy Hobbs - 03-21-2012, 01:46 PM
RE: A Lesson In Prolepsis - by Erthona - 03-21-2012, 02:36 PM
RE: A Lesson In Prolepsis - by Bronte - 03-21-2012, 08:29 PM
RE: A Lesson In Prolepsis - by billy - 03-22-2012, 12:15 PM
RE: A Lesson In Prolepsis - by Roy Hobbs - 03-24-2012, 02:05 AM
RE: A Lesson In Prolepsis - by billy - 03-26-2012, 12:31 PM
RE: A Lesson In Prolepsis - by Roy Hobbs - 03-26-2012, 11:08 PM
RE: A Lesson In Prolepsis - by heslopian - 03-27-2012, 02:16 AM
RE: A Lesson In Prolepsis - by Roy Hobbs - 03-28-2012, 09:22 AM



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