03-22-2012, 06:44 AM
(02-24-2012, 07:26 AM)abu nuwas Wrote: Aspire she did, she did; she did aspireit has three voices as well
To be, to be, to be.
Inspire she did, she did; she did inspire
To love, to love, to love
Around the lanes, the lanes; the lanes around
She went, and went, and went
Along the shore, the shore; the shore along
She strode, she strode, she strode.
Beneath the cliffs, the cliffs; the cliffs beneath
Is Sea, is Sea, is Sea.
Of clouds she dreamed, she dreamed; she dreamed of clouds
And sky, and sky, and sky.
Her home she loves, she loves;she loves her home
And will, and will, and will.
( It occurred to me that this in its way relates to the thread about rhyming. Not new.)
(02-25-2012, 09:48 AM)abu nuwas Wrote: Your 'and' I think is joining the 'and' club where my old Biarritz poem lives -still unresolved-- but this more straight-forward. Thanks again.Abu, Roy once gave me a thread lesson why "And" reinforced a line over "as" I have never looked at "as" in the same way since and always think three times befor I use it,
Perfection changes with the light and light goes on for infinity ~~~Bronte


