I find I fear (for Ray)

[billy]

i refuse to delve into the workings of this because i think it's absolute after the first read.
even if i hadn't saw the to-ing and fro-ing between you both and even if i didn't know who ray were, i'd still think it extremely well done. the use of eliot's prufrock works a treat, much more so than the romantics and others (which were in their own delectable) it's got a bit of cliche in it but who cares, it's all grist to the mill. an excellent read and a really good piece of writing jmo

thanks for the read.