03-13-2012, 07:23 AM
All serious poetry should be in fun and misc.
Critique categories are (don't tell anyone): strictly for socializing.
1. 5-7-5 is insectoid.
2. Really love 1,2,3,10
3. i(I) resemble 4
4. All seriousness aside, these/this are/is quiet wonderful.
Ray
Old pond ; spring jumps in : sound of frogs
a brightly colored fungus that grows in bark inclusions