Weird Desires

[billy]

it does have a gerry springer feel but more understanding, as though the pov is actually concerned as to what's going on. the spaniard proposing to the sister outlines the weirdness of what's transpiring. some good lines jack the circle of piss line is excellent image wise and simile-wise. the narration feels kind and is well done. i have no nits to speak of with it.
thanks for the read.