Forgotten Messages
#3

What are the odds that the first two comments would come
from reprobate daffodils? (Oh, right, this is pigpen.) Smile

Try changing the poem to one about unworth that ain't forgot and
be sure and work in: "and that daffodils taunt me in French".
I agree with repro#1 above, it's a great line.


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Forgotten Messages - by heslopian - 03-07-2012, 10:26 PM
RE: Forgotten Messages - by Erthona - 03-08-2012, 10:35 AM
RE: Forgotten Messages - by rayheinrich - 03-08-2012, 11:51 AM
RE: Forgotten Messages - by heslopian - 03-08-2012, 01:01 PM
RE: Forgotten Messages - by billy - 03-08-2012, 05:14 PM
RE: Forgotten Messages - by tectak - 03-08-2012, 06:13 PM
RE: Forgotten Messages - by heslopian - 03-08-2012, 08:49 PM
RE: Forgotten Messages - by rayheinrich - 03-09-2012, 12:03 AM
RE: Forgotten Messages - by heslopian - 03-09-2012, 08:37 AM
RE: Forgotten Messages - by tectak - 03-10-2012, 01:50 AM
RE: Forgotten Messages - by Erthona - 03-10-2012, 03:58 AM



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