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Empress of Ireland
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03-05-2012, 03:00 PM
A nice little tribute... I especially liked how the scale built up from the first to the second stanza. Your question mark at the end is jarring, thoughtful, and apt. In history we do try to remember things, to commemorate, but sometimes it isn't so clear what we really mean to achieve by it.
PS. If you can, try your hand at giving some of the others a bit of feedback. If you already have, thanks, can you do some more?
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Empress of Ireland - by ckeo - 03-05-2012, 01:50 AM
RE: Empress of Ireland - by abu nuwas - 03-05-2012, 09:07 AM
RE: Empress of Ireland - by ckeo - 03-06-2012, 08:45 AM
RE: Empress of Ireland - by billy - 03-05-2012, 01:16 PM
RE: Empress of Ireland - by addy - 03-05-2012, 03:00 PM
RE: Empress of Ireland - by ckeo - 03-06-2012, 08:52 AM
RE: Empress of Ireland - by rayheinrich - 03-06-2012, 08:49 AM
RE: Empress of Ireland - by abu nuwas - 03-06-2012, 09:26 AM
RE: Empress of Ireland - by ckeo - 03-06-2012, 09:38 AM
RE: Empress of Ireland - by abu nuwas - 03-06-2012, 10:38 AM
RE: Empress of Ireland - by rayheinrich - 03-06-2012, 09:48 PM
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