03-05-2012, 09:07 AM
I am not sure about 'Fun'. It was fascinating to read about this naval tragedy, and I tried to discover, with no luck, whether there were any plans to raise the vessel.
Mr Brinnen seems to have had problems all of his own. I very much liked 'as pages and years passed by', and I hope that this man's efforts to bring the event to public attention will be successful. I think I should have been strict with the meter, but otherwise, a tale well told, tho you may care to correct s.2 l.3 to 'cries'.
Mr Brinnen seems to have had problems all of his own. I very much liked 'as pages and years passed by', and I hope that this man's efforts to bring the event to public attention will be successful. I think I should have been strict with the meter, but otherwise, a tale well told, tho you may care to correct s.2 l.3 to 'cries'.