(content) Pleasures

[popeye]

Once again Jack you've pricked my subconscious, poetry at its most raw, open and honest aspect. The first stanza could almost stand alone. In the the third would moonbeams instead of roofbeams have been too cliche? The last two lines made me wince a bit at the thought of those swollen goods penetrating! The fourth stanza with the comfort food factor tells me a story that I see every time I go to a shopping centre, with those three lines you've captured the entire fast food culture and the last stanza asserts your independence as a thinking human being! Well written champ,, thanks for sharing.

PS where would we be without art! Second stanza.