02-26-2012, 05:31 AM
Well I hear ya! You just taught me a tiny lesson about paying attention 
I need to start a thread on this, but off topic: I need a class on reading poetry before I study any more about writing it.
On topic: Umm . . . okay I have nothing else to say. But I did read it again with extra pause (I was reading it run-on) and to be honest, I thought it would only make the repetition more jarring, but instead it softened it into a sway. Almost like the ocean waves . . .
I need to start a thread on this, but off topic: I need a class on reading poetry before I study any more about writing it.
On topic: Umm . . . okay I have nothing else to say. But I did read it again with extra pause (I was reading it run-on) and to be honest, I thought it would only make the repetition more jarring, but instead it softened it into a sway. Almost like the ocean waves . . .