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Okay now that I've read your comments and Leanne's, I see it like a song in a way. Th repetition still makes me have that little grin when someone is trying real hard, but just not quite getting it, though.

To be honest, I actually did think prostitute for a second, but that would have made the first four lines either odd things to say about a hooker or very cheeky. It's obvious in the text that she was/is someone special. I get a cool image of a woman on the shore in the wind with a rather loose, flowing sundress- white or yellow and she's smiling very big.

The more I read it the more I like it. Sometimes I just have a hard time getting what people are on about, ya know? I think maybe I understand, but like with this one I thought that it had to be more- and actually it turned out to be more, but not the way I thought. It is more loaded with images and ideas that trigger ideas than I thought, but the meaning was just as simple as when I first read it.

Thanks for taking the time to help me y'all.

Thanks, Mark. I can kind of ram 'Good night Irene' into it....over to you!! Your image is not far off the mark, Mark For a separate thread, I am wondering about Personal personal v just a person's character leeching out even if they are writing about
trains. I originally swore that I would never disclose any personal stuff....