02-24-2012, 04:47 AM
(02-16-2012, 04:19 AM)Leanne Wrote: Welcome to photoreal poetryClean and clipped
Perfect reproduction of meaning
One single image
Hold still
Smile
Pop
Cultural deficits
Campbell’s soup and cream of
Consciousness
This is where you stay
Do not think
Outside
The box
Does not exist
Except as another
Extracted and impacted
Cliché
Commitment verse..point made and no mistake......This is not really a crit as this is not really poetry....but it is good. You want bovver? Wait till erthona sees those capitals!
Best,
Tectak
Stay fresh.

