Dress Code

[Philatone]

leanne-
a number of your suggestions I actually had originally, only to backtrack on. thanks for the support to change them back, as well as the feedback in general. always helpful!

popeye/ jiminy (right?
could not agree more! thanks so much for the time

ray
thanks for the input on the last stanza, will certainly consider it

erthona
as with ray, am going to re-examine the last stanza. will also take a look at the "bold" bit with the sun. appreciate your final comment so much! it comes at a time I feel much the opposite, so is certainly great to hear

tec
seems like I took you on a bit of an adventure in the beginning. as always, your crit is valuable. I'm not sure if I'll delete that one stanza yet, especially with the last one receiving more pokes, but am not throwing the idea away yet. many of the other suggestions I can definitely use

mark
am going to take time to make some changes; hopefully that will clear things for you! thanks for your time; always a pleasure and helpful to have your feedback