< gratuitous wordage >

[tectak]

verbal bondagetied up in"nots"
requires no safe wordthis may be lost on some but not on me.Mine is "jettison". Discuss.

participants should begin
already flayed, as skin
has no part to playfine stanza but leaves the metaphor in s1 somewhat diminished. Flayed? And no safe word screamed out?

held still by the
thrill of striking
poesyooooo! You are risqué

all poets are flaccid ALL poets. Surely you are not that promiscuous.....excellent word choice,though.
when gagged

and no poem
is worth


going without coffeeor a fag afterwards. Am I reading this wrong?

Yes.
Best,
Tectak

Bugger. I am not sure who I am writing this critique for any more. Sorry rayheinrich if you have had your pice hijacked. I will get back.
Best,
Tectak

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                < gratuitous wordage >
            
            a lot of people ask for coffee
            
            and a little kiss in the morning
            
            using only the words they need
            
            but poets
            
            (and you've guessed it by now)
            
            kill for the pleasure of it
            
                      - - -



No uncreative, dullard remarks should follow.
Get off your ass and write something creative.
.
Phew. That's alright then.
Tectak