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(02-22-2012, 05:19 PM)Leanne Wrote:  verbal bondagetied up in"nots"
requires no safe wordthis may be lost on some but not on me.Mine is "jettison". Discuss.

participants should begin
already flayed, as skin
has no part to playfine stanza but leaves the metaphor in s1 somewhat diminished. Flayed? And no safe word screamed out?Smile

held still by the
thrill of striking
poesyooooo! You are risqué

all poets are flaccid ALL poets. Surely you are not that promiscuous.....excellent word choice,though.
when gagged

and no poem
is worth


going without coffeeor a fag afterwards. Am I reading this wrong?Tongue
Yes.
Best,
Tectak
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Messages In This Thread
< gratuitous wordage > - by rayheinrich - 02-22-2012, 04:44 PM
RE: < gratuitous wordage > - by Leanne - 02-22-2012, 05:19 PM
RE: < gratuitous wordage > - by tectak - 02-22-2012, 06:28 PM
RE: < gratuitous wordage > - by tectak - 02-23-2012, 12:30 AM
RE: < gratuitous wordage > - by Leanne - 02-22-2012, 06:52 PM
RE: < gratuitous wordage > - by Erthona - 02-22-2012, 07:26 PM
RE: < gratuitous wordage > - by Wildcard - 02-23-2012, 06:01 AM
RE: < gratuitous wordage > - by rayheinrich - 02-23-2012, 06:19 AM



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