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[bogpan]

Hi bogpan,
Haven't seen you around in a while. I'll give this another read later, but on this first read it is a really nice poem. On L8, you might need to specify that the 'young men' left for clarity, but I might be wrong.

When you can, try to read some of the other poetry on the site and give the poet your thoughts. We would love to hear your opinions and advice.

Hi, Mark! Glad you found time to read.
We old guys have more care and less time for poetry. Please be understood properly - many times I have prepared reviews for poems that read the forum but at the last moment to give up the publication. The most important reasons are language and differing cultural traditions. I admit that I first see criticism of each line of a poem. This approach was relevant in Europe in the 60s of last century, but certainly now out of date. If postmodernism is a major approach by testing intertekstulanite links in the text. http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Intertextuality
In Slavic syntax, has a "blackout" of the meaning of words, the possibility for different interpretations, while agliyskiyat language requires precise meaning (at least to my knowledge of languages), making it impossible for translation and for the post by my side due to the fact that I look for another instinctive sense of the word.
The vision of clichés is also different. For example, I saw with surprise that "green hills" are cliche, but the moon does not fall within the list of clichés.
These are some of the reasons for my silence. Of course, I mean that the forum is built on the "feedback".
As line 8 Be sure that if I had only to young men, just as would be the text.
Thank you!><