02-22-2012, 04:35 AM
Ah, yes...
Mine's a fun bit of doggerel. Yours, on the other hand,
feels of ancient origins, makes me wish I knew its tongue.
(Even had to Google its origin and read your comments
to make sure it was your very own keen fiction. Liked
the rest of the story that went along with it BTW.)
You should post it in its entirety in misc. for the rest to read.
P.S. It reminds me of the flag story in Louis Malle's film:
"My Dinner with Andre" (Written/acted by Wallace Shawn
and Andre Gregory.)
P.P.S. I think half-decent metrical feet are usually punctuation
enough. IMHO, of course.
a brightly colored fungus that grows in bark inclusions