02-22-2012, 01:32 AM
Hi bogpan,
Haven't seen you around in a while. I'll give this another read later, but on this first read it is a really nice poem. On L8, you might need to specify that the 'young men' left for clarity, but I might be wrong.
When you can, try to read some of the other poetry on the site and give the poet your thoughts. We would love to hear your opinions and advice.
Haven't seen you around in a while. I'll give this another read later, but on this first read it is a really nice poem. On L8, you might need to specify that the 'young men' left for clarity, but I might be wrong.
When you can, try to read some of the other poetry on the site and give the poet your thoughts. We would love to hear your opinions and advice.