02-18-2012, 07:47 PM
1 love the title.
the rest is also enjoyable.
about the poet content; I've been one since i started
writing it 12 year ago.
i doubt i'll ever be a good one though
and that's it about poets, they tell you there a poet but never say
"yeah, I'm a poet who's crap at poetry"
because what the world needs, really really needs
is another pretentious, prosy,
navel-gazing poet
like me.
a veritable hammer.
some good sonics in the piece, no suggestions on how to make it better, i found it good to go you navel gazer
good to see you on the boards
the rest is also enjoyable.
about the poet content; I've been one since i started
writing it 12 year ago.
i doubt i'll ever be a good one though
and that's it about poets, they tell you there a poet but never say
"yeah, I'm a poet who's crap at poetry"
because what the world needs, really really needs
is another pretentious, prosy,
navel-gazing poet
like me.
a veritable hammer.
some good sonics in the piece, no suggestions on how to make it better, i found it good to go you navel gazer
good to see you on the boards