Artificial Preservatives
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And so beautifully laid out this poem is. Not like those ones
whose only intent seems to be even lines. Talk about boxes!
(Please note: I made no mention of Greek gods.)

The idea of "reproduction of meaning" bent my brain cells when
I tried to wrap my brain. This is definitely Dr. Who territory.

"photoreal poetry"
"One single image/Hold still/Smile/Pop"
What excellent descriptions of haiku!

You can extract the box from the Cliché, but you can't extract
the Cliché from the box. Terribly impactful, and toothy!






                                                                                                                                all this useless beauty... but what the hell, why not?
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Artificial Preservatives - by Leanne - 02-16-2012, 04:19 AM
RE: Artificial Preservatives - by rayheinrich - 02-16-2012, 09:45 PM
RE: Artificial Preservatives - by Leanne - 02-17-2012, 05:17 AM
RE: Artificial Preservatives - by rayheinrich - 02-17-2012, 04:58 PM
RE: Artificial Preservatives - by billy - 02-17-2012, 08:58 PM
RE: Artificial Preservatives - by Leanne - 02-18-2012, 04:06 AM
RE: Artificial Preservatives - by rayheinrich - 02-18-2012, 04:48 AM
RE: Artificial Preservatives - by Leanne - 02-18-2012, 04:59 AM
RE: Artificial Preservatives - by tectak - 02-24-2012, 04:47 AM



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