02-16-2012, 04:50 AM
jack
-understand the comments about the peeking and judge image; will certainly have a go at thinking about it. thanks for the time!
tec
-interesting idea I hadn't considered of moving the stanzas around; I am in the middle of thinking about it. I appreciate your returns to the piece and for giving me more tangible parts to examine, and am sorry if perhaps our styles aren't meshing as well as desired. granted, the pieces you have looked at of mine are of rather different subject matter than I traditionally approach, which certainly could bring up issues of 'clarity'. I try not to make the meaning too cryptic to the point of being incomprehensible, but at the same time if I wouldn't expect a reader to take in 100% of what I considered, just as I wouldn't see from another perspective 100% either.
thank you for your suggestions, tec
todd
a wealth of helpful notes that I will employ shortly; thanks so much
-understand the comments about the peeking and judge image; will certainly have a go at thinking about it. thanks for the time!
tec
-interesting idea I hadn't considered of moving the stanzas around; I am in the middle of thinking about it. I appreciate your returns to the piece and for giving me more tangible parts to examine, and am sorry if perhaps our styles aren't meshing as well as desired. granted, the pieces you have looked at of mine are of rather different subject matter than I traditionally approach, which certainly could bring up issues of 'clarity'. I try not to make the meaning too cryptic to the point of being incomprehensible, but at the same time if I wouldn't expect a reader to take in 100% of what I considered, just as I wouldn't see from another perspective 100% either.
thank you for your suggestions, tec
todd
a wealth of helpful notes that I will employ shortly; thanks so much
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