Once In a While Meltdown

Once In a While Meltdown

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#26

02-15-2012, 10:57 PM

AAAAAARRRRRRGGGGGHHHHH!
It is the GRAMMAR which/that is WRONG. Just put a full-stop after the word "mind" and begin a new sentence with a CAPITAL letter. Then it kind of works

Watching a nervous predator
lose her mind. Down the hallway,
into the distant bedroom.......

Best,
tectak

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Once In a While Meltdown - by Wildcard - 11-09-2011, 05:57 AM

RE: Once In a While Meltdown - by Leanne - 11-09-2011, 06:45 AM

RE: Once In a While Meltdown - by Wildcard - 11-09-2011, 07:12 AM

RE: Once In a While Meltdown - by Philatone - 11-09-2011, 07:48 AM

RE: Once In a While Meltdown - by Wildcard - 11-09-2011, 08:30 AM

RE: Once In a While Meltdown - by grannyjill - 11-11-2011, 11:50 PM

RE: Once In a While Meltdown - by billy - 11-14-2011, 11:42 AM

RE: Once In a While Meltdown - by addy - 11-14-2011, 12:48 PM

RE: Once In a While Meltdown - by Wildcard - 02-02-2012, 08:27 AM

RE: Once In a While Meltdown - by tectak - 02-11-2012, 02:31 AM