02-15-2012, 04:02 AM
You make very valid points- so much so that I have begun to feel my resolve weaken. However, let me make one more attempt to explain myself:
"When the squirrel heard a noise, it panicked into the underbrush."
I'm using 'lose her mind' as a descriptor for the way she exited the room. Can you give me an example of how you would reword that part?
"When the squirrel heard a noise, it panicked into the underbrush."
I'm using 'lose her mind' as a descriptor for the way she exited the room. Can you give me an example of how you would reword that part?

