02-10-2012, 06:31 PM
I enjoyed how this whole poem felt like a lead up to the beginning of a work, as though you were always on the cusp of your true theme, when really your true theme all along was inspiration and the search for it.
I think you mean "peeking" rather than "peaking above," and the "judge in a courtroom" simile felt a bit cliche; JMHO.
Thanks for the read, Philatone.
I think you mean "peeking" rather than "peaking above," and the "judge in a courtroom" simile felt a bit cliche; JMHO.
Thanks for the read, Philatone.
"We believe that we invent symbols. The truth is that they invent us; we are their creatures, shaped by their hard, defining edges." - Gene Wolfe