02-09-2012, 03:03 PM
hello tectac!
i'm sorry if it appears as a free-thinking technique; that certainly wasn't the intention at all as it did have a goal in mind from the beginning...
the stanzas i used to show shifts in thought processes, mostly so in the opening stanzas, so I could definitely understand an argument to unify the closing stanzas in the revised version (I had adjusted the ending in the revision to a degree--the revision does end with "cross". I kept the original up to emphasize the changes made).
I appreciate the thoughts and time you have given. if you could advise me on which specific sections/ images you struggled most with, I am certainly willing to take a closer look.
thanks again!
i'm sorry if it appears as a free-thinking technique; that certainly wasn't the intention at all as it did have a goal in mind from the beginning...
the stanzas i used to show shifts in thought processes, mostly so in the opening stanzas, so I could definitely understand an argument to unify the closing stanzas in the revised version (I had adjusted the ending in the revision to a degree--the revision does end with "cross". I kept the original up to emphasize the changes made).
I appreciate the thoughts and time you have given. if you could advise me on which specific sections/ images you struggled most with, I am certainly willing to take a closer look.
thanks again!
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