02-06-2012, 04:52 AM
erthona- thanks for your time. am going to take a look at the second half and will probably decide on some changes, especially with the consensus I'm getting on them. appreciate your input, as always.
billy- perhaps the jury image was too much of a stretch. will have a look at that; i'm leaning towards you suggestion on the "voice", or at least altering everything that follows it. oh, and glad you liked "fettered"; I was kinda excited when it came to me! thank you, always helpful!
mark- I think my intentions led you where I wanted, mark! thanks for the time, as well as the formatting--i actually hadn't noticed the change until your post, so maybe it works well in either position
billy- perhaps the jury image was too much of a stretch. will have a look at that; i'm leaning towards you suggestion on the "voice", or at least altering everything that follows it. oh, and glad you liked "fettered"; I was kinda excited when it came to me! thank you, always helpful!
mark- I think my intentions led you where I wanted, mark! thanks for the time, as well as the formatting--i actually hadn't noticed the change until your post, so maybe it works well in either position
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