02-03-2012, 11:50 AM
Ah, love so unrequited, turns to hate so uninvited, and whisks the world away, in a year or in a day? It matters not, come what may, for within each soul are the seeds for his destruction.
There are a number of themes that seem to run through this. Love, lust, innocence, loss of innocence and so on. You make a big shift midway in the poem going from Aphrodite to Aries, creating very shocking images that speak to the way we feel in those. They have to be big because we feel like we have anger enough to melt the whole world. I like the way you did that.
Dale
There are a number of themes that seem to run through this. Love, lust, innocence, loss of innocence and so on. You make a big shift midway in the poem going from Aphrodite to Aries, creating very shocking images that speak to the way we feel in those. They have to be big because we feel like we have anger enough to melt the whole world. I like the way you did that.
Dale
How long after picking up the brush, the first masterpiece?
The goal is not to obfuscate that which is clear, but make clear that which isn't.
The goal is not to obfuscate that which is clear, but make clear that which isn't.