canyon
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Hi Geoff,
I intended to do a line-by-line, but it would have consisted of --good one, --nice one, --beautiful so I am just going to say that. Good one, nice one, beautiful. Big Grin

I have to echo the sentiments on what I consider to be 'inverted' logic ('scraping trees', 'could go no further from home', etc.) Wonderful stuff that keeps it fresh. I did read the older revisions, but it's like hearing a song for the first time and then listening to an older version: I can only see the last revision because it's best imo.

Thanks for sharing.
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canyon - by Philatone - 11-30-2011, 07:44 AM
RE: canyon - by grannyjill - 11-30-2011, 04:51 PM
RE: canyon - by Philatone - 11-30-2011, 10:57 PM
RE: canyon - by grannyjill - 12-01-2011, 04:29 PM
RE: canyon - by Leanne - 12-04-2011, 07:52 AM
RE: canyon - by Aish - 12-19-2011, 07:50 PM
RE: canyon - by grannyjill - 12-19-2011, 08:51 PM
RE: canyon - by Philatone - 12-20-2011, 02:20 PM
RE: canyon - by billy - 01-17-2012, 10:13 PM
RE: canyon - by Wildcard - 01-20-2012, 05:29 AM



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