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We agree, we both think they're poems.


"so you're saying the message you try and get across doesn't matter"

No, I'm saying how new/original it seems depends on the audience.
(How much it matters also depends on the audience.)


yet you do a poem to get a point across

Yes, on this one. But you know there are lots of other reasons as well.


to think a poem is a real milkshake would probably mean someone's
a retard or seeing a mirage.

Yes, or intentionally being funny. Anybody who calls one of my
masterpieces a milkshake, BTW, is classified as a cretin.


i am a dog bone
the rear leg with st vitus's dance

I must be scratching you in just the right spot.


i quite like the short version except it's mango flavoured.

Hey, mango, sure, I can go with mango

                                                                                                                a brightly colored fungus that grows in bark inclusions
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< strawberry milkshake > - by rayheinrich - 01-14-2012, 07:57 AM
RE: < strawberry milkshake > - by Wildcard - 01-14-2012, 09:34 AM
RE: < strawberry milkshake > - by rayheinrich - 01-15-2012, 10:30 PM
RE: < strawberry milkshake > - by billy - 01-15-2012, 10:45 PM
RE: < strawberry milkshake > - by rayheinrich - 01-16-2012, 04:35 AM



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