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usually if it looks like prose that's what it is.
poetry prose is a little different.
i'd say both the pieces on show are poems.
they use poetic device. normally if you use a spade you're digging.....or killing someone Big Grin

so you're saying the message you try and get across doesn't matter. yet you do a poem to get a point across. to think a poem is a real milkshake would probably mean someones a retard or seeing a mirage.

i am a dog bone
the rear leg with st vitus's dance

i quite like the short version except it's mango flavoured.
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< strawberry milkshake > - by rayheinrich - 01-14-2012, 07:57 AM
RE: < strawberry milkshake > - by Wildcard - 01-14-2012, 09:34 AM
RE: < strawberry milkshake > - by rayheinrich - 01-15-2012, 10:30 PM
RE: < strawberry milkshake > - by billy - 01-15-2012, 10:45 PM
RE: < strawberry milkshake > - by rayheinrich - 01-16-2012, 04:35 AM



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