Apollon's Assembly
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I would vote for you. You seem to avoid those weird syntactical turns that plague most sonnets. Iambic pentameter does not lend itself easily to natural speech.

Dale
How long after picking up the brush, the first masterpiece?

The goal is not to obfuscate that which is clear, but make clear that which isn't.
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Apollon's Assembly - by Leanne - 01-11-2012, 11:12 AM
RE: Apollon's Assembly - by Erthona - 01-11-2012, 02:35 PM
RE: Apollon's Assembly - by addy - 01-11-2012, 02:41 PM
RE: Apollon's Assembly - by Leanne - 01-11-2012, 03:11 PM
RE: Apollon's Assembly - by rayheinrich - 01-11-2012, 04:29 PM
RE: Apollon's Assembly - by Leanne - 01-11-2012, 05:31 PM
RE: Apollon's Assembly - by Erthona - 01-11-2012, 08:18 PM
RE: Apollon's Assembly - by rayheinrich - 01-11-2012, 08:45 PM
RE: Apollon's Assembly - by billy - 01-11-2012, 11:08 PM



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