12-29-2011, 05:57 AM
leanne- appreciate what you have said; I'm glad that stanza in particular stuck out to you! it was a fun one to write (wish all stanzas, and poems for that matter, were).
granny-I'll take a look at the line with the stereo; but if you reached any conclusion at all I'm happy about that (especially if it matches my intention)
I was a little worried about the thief reference, so it may not be quite clear enough.
granny-I'll take a look at the line with the stereo; but if you reached any conclusion at all I'm happy about that (especially if it matches my intention)
I was a little worried about the thief reference, so it may not be quite clear enough.
Written only for you to consider.