A Love Letter to my dear one.

[grannyjill]

Thanks, billy - I had clocked the tangled-fingered 'amd' and thought that I had amended it, obviously, not.

"I agree, re last verse" she said, wearily, "most of my poetry ends with a whimper not a bang since I cannot maintain my genius for more than a couple of minutes"

There is no reason why the 'exasperated' cannot be moved down - except I've seen it sitting at the end of that line for so long - it seems natural to be there!